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Björn's avatar

I love how you used the dragon myth for the new drone warfare... being engineer I am amazed how much people have been able to combine low-tech with high tech in these simple devices. But alas the ultimate dragon is still there behind waiting to be released.

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Kim M Russell's avatar

An interesting twist to the prompt, Ain, which has taught me something I didn’t know before. Resistance to war has moved on since WW2. I like the way you compare them to medieval tales and the lines:

‘For the dragon eyes always search for signs

Ready to spit fire from afar’

and the use of powerful active verbs such as ‘swoop’, ‘whirring’, ‘lashing’ and ‘lunge’.

I think your dragons are more terrifying than the mythological ones.

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